amazing
the artwork here is great, and the story is nice. I like the pace of the story, and how it works together.
amazing
the artwork here is great, and the story is nice. I like the pace of the story, and how it works together.
yeah...
I saw a lot of potential for something really funny, but it wasn't quite there. it almost felt like an old sitcom, minus the laugh track. Otherwise, it was an ok animation. Not a personal favorite, but it was good work. Keep it up. I like the better developed story. Just need to work on keeping the humor up with it. Don't take away from the story, just try to add more humor off of it.
This was meant to be more plot than comedy as opposed to the past five episodes. I'm glad people are being more honest with this one so I know what to get better at!
I'm a music major who enjoys all kinds of music. I also enjoy building, movie making, and smithing. I've been coming to newgrounds for years, and never signed up, but that's all changing now.
Age 35, Male
Student
Rowan University
Fairfield, CT
Joined on 12/1/07